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The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000).

The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000). rLPem
The given line graph represents the information on average monthly rainfalls with centimetres while the table shows a number of average rainfalls for three towns in Kona area in Hawaii from 1971 to 2000 for a 30-year period. As an overall trend, for average rainfalls in September at Kainaliu touched the highest point, whereas at Holualoa in December touched the lowes point. While for average annual rainfall the reach the peak at Kainaliu and the reached the nadir at Opihihale. As it is presented in the line graph at Kainaliu area has a high average rainfall, whereas the highes at 17 centimetres and the lowest at 7 centimetres. For Holualoa area, there is experience a fluctuations graph with a slightly difference. Eximine the line graph the peak at 12 centimetres and the lowest at almost 6 centimetres. In addition, at Opihihale area average rainfalls 4 centimetres with a slightly difference.
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in Hawaii from 1971 to 2000 for a 30-year period.

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in September at
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Holualoa
in December touched the
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Opihihale
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4
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IELTS academic The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000).

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