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The diagram shows the clay pots manufacturing.

The diagram shows the clay pots manufacturing. keO9e

The diagram explains the way in which pots are manufactured by various steps. Overall, the complex process consists of eleven stages, beginning with the raw materials and ending up with finished pots. First of all, the clay is collected by big digger to serve as a raw material for pots manufacturing. After that, it is transported in a factory by a truck. Before mixing with water, these clay made smaller by two different crushing Machines. Following this, these contents are converted into moulds. After that, moulds are put for drying for approximately 4-6 hours. In the next stage, these moulds are assembled and made into pots. Subsequently, pots are heated in the oven at temperature of 100 degrees Celsius. Finally, before finished pots process, the pots are coloured in colour firing.

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