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The chart compared the median rate of Vietnamese studying abroad in three countries from 2000 to 2015.

The chart compared the median rate of Vietnamese studying abroad in three countries from 2000 to 2015. keO0n
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of athletes split by gender in the Olympics between 1924 and 2012. Meanwhile the line shows the trend of total joiners during the given period. Overall, total numbers of participants went up slightly by approximately 1, 000 each observation period. While the increase of men athletes was likely around 1, 000 every term of the Olympics, it was seen that the rate of women jumped up to mostly triple each period. While The year 1924 witnessed the figure of men joining the Olympics was 10 times compared to women, on the contrary the proportion of sex was 75 and 25% and nearly balanced to 60 and 40 percent in 2012. In summary, the bar chart and line chart displayed how many athletes took part in the Olympics. Though the result shows the gap of gender in 1924, we can oversighted the increasing number of women helped the distance in 2012 is closer than before.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of athletes split by gender in the Olympics between 1924 and 2012.
Meanwhile
the line
shows
the trend of total joiners during the
given
period.

Overall
, total numbers of participants went up
slightly
by approximately 1, 000 each observation period. While the increase of
men
athletes was likely around 1, 000 every term of the Olympics, it was
seen
that the rate of women jumped up to
mostly
triple each period. While The year 1924 witnessed the figure of
men
joining the Olympics was 10 times compared to women,
on the contrary
the proportion of sex was 75 and 25% and
nearly
balanced to 60 and 40 percent in 2012.

In summary, the bar chart and line chart displayed how
many
athletes
took part
in the Olympics. Though the result
shows
the gap of gender in 1924, we can
oversighted
the increasing number of women
helped
the distance in 2012 is closer than
before
.
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