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The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period.

The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period. MlDpa
The chart shows the average viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period. The figure for the 1 pm News remained fairly stable, hovering at around 1. 3 million throughout the year. The figure for the 6 pm News began the year at 4. 8 million. It fluctuated, but the general trend was downwards, and it ended the year at 3. 4 million. The figure for the 9: 30 News gradually increased from 3. 2 million viewers per day in January to a peak of 3. 8 million in May. However, this month saw the introduction of the 11 pm News, and the figure for the 9: 30 News plummeted, hitting a low point of 1. 1 million in August. In the same period, the figure for the 11 pm news rocketed from 0. 2 million to 4. 1 million. At this point, the trend reversed. From August onwards, the figure for the 9: 30 news grew steadily, reaching 3 million by the end of the year. Meanwhile, the figure for the 11 pm News declined sharply, and in December fell below the 1 million marks.
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for Channel One
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News
over a 12-month period. The
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for the 1 pm
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remained
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stable, hovering at around 1. 3
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million
throughout the
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. The
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for the 6 pm
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began the
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at 4. 8
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million
. It fluctuated,
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the general trend was downwards, and it ended the
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at 3. 4 million.

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for the 9: 30
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gradually
increased from 3. 2
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viewers per day in January to a peak of 3. 8
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in May.
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, this month
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the introduction of the 11 pm
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, and the
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for the 9: 30
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plummeted, hitting a low point of 1. 1
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million
in August. In the same period, the
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for the 11 pm
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rocketed from 0. 2
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million
to 4. 1
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. At this point, the trend reversed. From August onwards, the
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for the 9: 30
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grew
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by the
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. Meanwhile, the
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for the 11 pm
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declined
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marks.
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