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The pictures show the changes in a self-study area of a language school in Vietnam after 2 years.

The pictures show the changes in a self-study area of a language school in Vietnam after 2 years. YglDn

The pictures illustrate how the layout of a self-study area of a language school in Vietnam changed over two years. Overall, significant changes were made in terms of the area’s interior design, especially on the right hand side of the area. The shelves, the entrance and the reception on the top of the area remained, while three private self-study rooms on the top right corner were converted into a larger room for self-study purposes and a studio after two years. Additionally, a cafeteria and a bulletin board were set up on the bottom right corner in 2018 and replaced the manager’s office, which was relocated to the opposite corner. The relocation of a manager’s office and a teacher’s desk in 2018 made the space for small tables become smaller. The shelves on the west still existed, but with smaller size, and a new space for laptops and Ipads was set up in the centre of the self- study area.

The pictures illustrate how the layout of a self-study You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of a language school in Vietnam This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over two years.

Overall
, significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
were made
 in terms of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area’s
 interior design, especially
 on the Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?right-hand
right hand
 side of the area.

The shelves, the entrance and the reception on the top of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 remained, while three private self-study rooms The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the top right corner"?in the top right corner
on the top right corner
were converted
 into a larger room for self-study purposes and a studio after two years. Additionally
, a cafeteria and a bulletin board were set
 up The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the bottom right corner"?in the bottom right corner
on the bottom right corner
 in 2018 and replaced the manager’s office, which was relocated
 to the opposite corner.

The relocation of a manager’s office and a teacher’s desk in 2018 made the space for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 tables become smaller. The shelves on the west still
 existed, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with smaller size, and a new space for laptops and Possible spelling mistake found.iPadsPadsiPadI pads
Ipads
was set
 up in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the self- study You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 