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Average activities of working women in paid employment

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The pie chart depicts the activities that go into an employed women's day and also gives a brief description on the time spent per activity. Main portion of their day is dedicated for their employment of about 7 hours apart from their respite period. Relatively significant activity would be to contribute for the housing chores. Women have very little time for themselves and they spend similar amount of time for their meals. Over all, the part shows that working women are very busy during the weekdays.

The pie chart depicts the activities that go into an employed women's day and also
 gives a brief description on the time spent per activity.

Main portion of their day is dedicated
 for their employment of about 7 hours apart from their respite period.

Relatively
 significant activity would be to contribute for the housing chores.

Women have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 time for Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).themselves, and
themselves and
 they spend similar amount of time for their meals. Over all, the part This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that working women are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy during the weekdays. 