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a city Felix stone between 1967 and 2001

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The provided maps clearly depict extensive renovations that will take place in a city Felix stone between 1967 and 2001. Overall, it is noticeable that the city can be subdivided into 2 main areas by the main road that run through the heart of the city from the east to the west: the north and the south. In the north-east, a large farmland was replaced by a hotel complex with its swimming pool and two tennis courts. Adjacent to the hotel, a row of apartments which were opposite to blocks of shops were intact. At the far end of north-west near the shops, a big golf course was still in service to 2001. Opposite to the golf course in the south-west where dunes and mangroves were located, wind turbines were placed along the beach. Close to this sea-woods area was a hotel, along with its newly-built spacious car park. Next to the hotel, a café was in a public beach, in which a marine and pier had been settles. Finally, at the end site of south-east area, a private beach was put in place of a fish market.
The provided maps
clearly
depict extensive renovations that will take place in a city Felix stone between 1967 and 2001.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the city can
be subdivided
into 2 main areas by the main road that run through the heart of the city from the east to the west: the north and the south.

In the north-east, a large farmland
was replaced
by a
hotel
complex with its swimming pool and two tennis courts. Adjacent to the
hotel
, a row of apartments which were opposite to blocks of shops were intact. At the far
end
of north-west near the shops, a
big
golf course was
still
in service to 2001.

Opposite to the golf course in the south-west where dunes and mangroves
were located
, wind turbines
were placed
along the beach. Close to this sea-woods area was a
hotel
, along with its
newly
-built spacious car park.
Next
to the
hotel
, a café was in a public beach, in which a marine and pier had been settles.
Finally
, at the
end
site of south-east area, a private beach
was put
in place of a fish market.
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IELTS academic a city Felix stone between 1967 and 2001

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6.5
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