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The diagram shows the process of creating solar power.

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The given diagram illustrates the process of conversion of solar light to usable form of energy such as electricity. It is stored as AC and DC current by using batteries and inverter. Overall, there are solar radiation from are converted to either AC or DC power supply for domestic or commercial purpose by using an electric controller. Initially the process started when solar panels absorb the high radiation of sun and convert it into renewable source of energy usually panels are placed near an area where the radiation is maximum. The stored energy are converted in state of electric current and passed to the charge controller to stabilize the voltage in desired form. Meanwhile these controllers provide the required form of electricity to either battery system for DC power supply or Inverters for AC power supply. There is a provision to get both DC and AC power supply from a controller together.
The
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given
diagram illustrates the process of conversion of solar light to usable form of energy such as electricity. It
is stored
as AC and DC
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current
by using batteries and inverter.

Overall
, there are solar radiation from
are converted
to either AC or DC
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power
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supply
for domestic or commercial purpose by using an electric controller.

Initially
the process
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started
when solar panels absorb the high radiation of sun and convert it into renewable source of energy
usually
panels
are placed
near an area where the radiation is maximum. The stored energy
are converted
in state of electric
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
and passed to the charge controller to stabilize the voltage in desired form.
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Meanwhile
these controllers provide the required form of electricity to either battery system for DC
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power
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supply
or Inverters for AC
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
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supply
. There is a provision to
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get
both DC and AC
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power
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
supply
from a controller together.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the process of creating solar power.

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152 words
6.0
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