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The diagram shows staff training by four companies for the period 2003 to 2006.

The diagram shows staff training by four companies for the period 2003 to 2006. mXXmK

The diagram shows staff training by four companies for the period 2003 to 2006. Companies A, B and C had similar levels, at between 25 and 28%, with company D significantly lower at 20%. By 2006, all companies had increased their training with D rising substantially to become the second largest at 35% whilst A grew less, ending about 10 % lower than others. A and B showed similar trends rising slightly in 2004, falling a little in 2005 and then growing more steadily in 2006 with the gap between them gradually increasing. In contrast, C and D showed very different changes. In 2003 training by D fell to a low of about 17% whilst C rose steeply reaching a high of over 35%. After significant growth by D, and a steady decline by C in 2004, the two companies converged in 2001 with C peaking at around 37% and D at 35%. Overall. It can be seen that staff training for all four companies increased, although following very different trends.

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