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The diagram shows staff training by four companies for the period 2003 to 2006.

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The diagram shows staff training by four companies for the period 2003 to 2006. Companies A, B and C had similar levels, at between 25 and 28%, with company D significantly lower at 20%. By 2006, all companies had increased their training with D rising substantially to become the second largest at 35% whilst A grew less, ending about 10 % lower than others. A and B showed similar trends rising slightly in 2004, falling a little in 2005 and then growing more steadily in 2006 with the gap between them gradually increasing. In contrast, C and D showed very different changes. In 2003 training by D fell to a low of about 17% whilst C rose steeply reaching a high of over 35%. After significant growth by D, and a steady decline by C in 2004, the two companies converged in 2001 with C peaking at around 37% and D at 35%. Overall. It can be seen that staff training for all four companies increased, although following very different trends.
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A, B and C had similar levels, at between 25 and 28%, with
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to become the second largest at 35% whilst A grew less, ending about 10 % lower than others. A and B
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in 2005 and then growing more
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. In 2003
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by D fell to a low of about 17% whilst C rose
steeply
reaching a high of over 35%. After significant growth by D, and a steady decline by C in 2004, the two
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converged in 2001 with C peaking at around 37% and D at 35%.

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for all four
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increased, although following
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IELTS academic The diagram shows staff training by four companies for the period 2003 to 2006.

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171 words
6.0
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