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The diagram shows plan of school site in 2004 and 2024

The diagram shows plan of school site in 2004 and 2024 yLLRd

The diagrams illustrates the area of a school sire in 2004 and plan to transform school till 2024. Overall, these will be major change in the new area of school in 2004. School will extend there area. Hence, students count will be increase just under double. Firstly, as one could see in figures there will be a new building, second parking on the opposite side of school. On the other hand, sports field is replaced by third building of school as well as, with new parking area. Therefore, sports field will shift in southern side towards trees. First and third building will connected by small path. Moreover, there will be a new road constructed by the backyard of second building. Some new trees will growned towards north east. Furthermore, there will new path to connect all three buildings with each other. Subsequently, new sports field compare to previous one is almost half size. Some trees will cut down and some will planted again

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just
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see
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. Therefore
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building
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small
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new
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. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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new
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growned
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north east
. Furthermore
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new
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new
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Some
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cut
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some
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