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The pie chart below shows the preference of online resources used by students at school. It is clear that the percentage of students using interactive games is the highest at 30%, while sciene magazine is the smallest with 6%. Online magazines ranked third with 18%, followed by nonfiction eBooks with 15%. Online dictionaries were the fifth library resource at 11%. In conclusion, the dominant form of online resources used by the students at Intel Secondary School Library is interactive games. Of all the other resources - fiction e-books, online magazines, non-fiction e-books, online dictionaries and science journals - students used science journals the least.
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using interactive games is the highest at 30%, while
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at 11%.

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IELTS academic pie chart shows the the preference of online resources used by students at school.

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