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My example i will get 10 makt

My example i will get 10 makt dpp3P
New cars are not as cheap as used carsKeeping fit as important as staying healthyA bee is not as big a bird Coffee is not as good as teaCalcuclus is not as easy as algebraOpen up a new research direction -Determine CS PPL, define specific representation rules for each type of map -Organize the establishment and production of maps - Systematize the catalogs => Circulation, preservation, lookup and use are better
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-Determine CS PPL, define specific representation
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-Organize the establishment and production of maps

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Systematize the catalogs
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Circulation, preservation, lookup and
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IELTS academic My example i will get 10 makt

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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