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some think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society

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In today's society, many parents have different views on how to raise their children and how they can be a good member of society. Some people think that parents are the main ones who teach their children these things and some think that schools are the good places to teach children. Personally, school is a place that very important in the development and character of children. It is true that many parents work at companies, so they do not have much time to teach their children. If they want to teach their children perfectly then one of them will have to quit their job and it is very difficult. Many parents do not have the necessary knowledge to teach their children.
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IELTS academic some think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society

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