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The diagram shows how to manufacture a frozen fish pie

The diagram shows how to manufacture a frozen fish pie BaxG6

The stages of fish pie production line is described in this diagram. Overall, there are eighteen processes in this illustration, beginning with delivering up potatoes, finishing with freezing fish pie. Firstly, potatoes are brought up to one month. They must be clean and usable. Secondly, potatoes are washed with clean water. Then they are peeled with modern equipments. After peeled potatoes are cut a lot of slices with sharp knives. Next, these slices are boiled in hot water. After that, they are colded. Then, chilled potatoes are stored to a lot of pockets. After that, salmon must be prepared. Firstly, lemon juice is squeezed on the salmon. Secondly, salt is added on it. Thirdly, skins and bones are removed by workers. Then, they are checked by inspectors. After, peas and sauce are prepared. Then, they are wrapped together. After that, wrapped pie is frozen in refrigerators. Then they are dispatchedto stores. Finally, the fish pie is ready for customer's purchases.

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described
 in this diagram.

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, there are eighteen processes in this illustration, beginning with delivering up You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
, finishing with freezing fish pie.

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potatoes
are brought
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must
 be clean and usable. Secondly
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potatoes
are washed
 with clean water. Then they are peeled
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After
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potatoes
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cut
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a lot of
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, these slices are boiled
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colded
. Then, chilled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
are stored
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a lot of
 pockets.

After that, salmon This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be prepared
. Firstly
, lemon juice is squeezed
 on the salmon. Secondly
, salt is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 on it. Thirdly
, skins and bones are removed
 by workers. Then, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 by inspectors. After, peas and sauce are prepared
. Then, they are wrapped
 together. After that, wrapped pie is frozen
 in refrigerators. Then they are Possible spelling mistake found.dispatched to
dispatchedto
 stores. Finally
, the fish pie is ready for customer's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
. 