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Given is a table illustrating the various TV programmes which three age groups preferred to watch in a European country in 2012. Overall, features film was most attractive, while TV dramas gained negligible attraction as well as it experienced the least incline as the people get older. In addition, news experienced the highest increase. Cartoon and TV dramas witnessed the opposite patterns. As it can be seen, figure of the cartoon for children aged between 11-15 was approximately 29 percent, whereas for the remained age groups it decreased by 18 and 4, respectively. 13 percent of the individuals who their age were 21-25 saw TV dramas, whereas for younger age groups the figures it decreased and the figures had approximately equal difference. News followed the down ward trend same as the TV dramas. The remained age groups had some fluctuation in their figures as the age groups get bigger, soap opera and sports followed the down ward trend, then they increased, whereas features film initially decreased, afterwards had the slight increase.
Given
is a table illustrating the various TV
programmes
which three
age
groups
preferred to
watch
in a European country in 2012.
Overall
, features film was most attractive, while TV dramas gained negligible attraction
as well
as it experienced the least incline as the
people
get
older.
In addition
, news experienced the highest increase.

Cartoon and TV dramas witnessed the opposite patterns. As it can be
seen
,
figure
of the cartoon for children aged between 11-15 was approximately 29 percent, whereas for the remained
age
groups
it decreased by 18 and 4,
respectively
. 13 percent of the individuals who their
age
were 21-25
saw
TV dramas, whereas for younger
age
groups
the
figures
it decreased and the
figures
had approximately equal difference. News followed the down ward trend same as the TV dramas.

The remained
age
groups
had
some
fluctuation in their
figures
as the
age
groups
get
bigger, soap opera and sports followed the down ward trend, then they increased, whereas features film
initially
decreased, afterwards had the slight increase.
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