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The two maps below show a city. The first map is from 1995 and the second is the present map.

The two maps below show a city. The first map is from 1995 and the second is the present map. j5a58
The maps depict considerable transformation of a region, situated beside the sea. The illustrate all the infrastructural developments from 1995 to present day. Overall, the coastal region has road running along the seaside and a branch going through the city. In present day, there is another branching in the west to facilitate extra roadside settlements. The city has seen a transformation in its fishing buissness. The fishing port is demolished and the local fish markets and shops are replaced by restaurants and apartments. During this period, the city is gradually mordernised along with an increased number of settlements. The hotel at the main road junction in 1995 is extended with a car parking. The farmland and the forest park area with number of different trees, are converted into golf course and two tennis constructed in the southern extension of the gold course. Currently, the cafe and few old settlements along the north heading roadstood strong in all these years. Apart from these few constructions, the city has many significant changes that has transformed the costal city.
The maps depict considerable transformation of a region, situated beside the sea.
The illustrate
all the infrastructural developments from 1995 to present day.

Overall
, the coastal region has road running along the seaside and a branch going through the city. In present day, there is another branching in the west to facilitate extra roadside settlements. The city has
seen
a transformation in its fishing
buissness
. The fishing port
is demolished
and the local fish markets and shops
are replaced
by restaurants and apartments. During this period, the city is
gradually
mordernised
along with an increased number of settlements.

The hotel at the main road junction in 1995
is extended
with a car parking. The farmland and the forest park area with number of
different
trees,
are converted
into golf course and two tennis constructed in the southern extension of the
gold
course.

Currently
, the
cafe
and few
old
settlements along the north heading
roadstood
strong in all these years. Apart from these few constructions, the city has
many
significant
changes
that has transformed the
costal
city.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show a city. The first map is from 1995 and the second is the present map.

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6.0
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