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The diagram shows how sunflower oil is produced

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The diagram illustrates a linear process in which sunflower oil is manufactured from a number of sunflower seeds. Overall, it is noticeable that this process involve several steps, from collecting sunflower seeds to pressing their oil for culinary and commercial purposes. To begin with, collected sunflower seeds are put into a magnetic drum before being placed in a cleaning seive. To complete this process, smaller pieces of seeds are crushed by a huge stoning machine. The aformentioned processes, consist of being put into a magnetic drum; being placed in a cleaning seive; being crushed by a stoning machine, assemble to a cleaning step. To proceed with the next step, the ground seeds are put into a dehuller. Afterwards, seeds are going to be flaked into smaller and thinner pieces prior to being cooked in a large cooking machine. Finally, sunflower seeds are pressed by a pressing machine to be a sunflower oil for sale.

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process
 in which sunflower oil is manufactured
 from a number of sunflower seeds.

Overall
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process
 involve several steps, from collecting sunflower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seeds
 to pressing their oil for culinary and commercial purposes.

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. To complete this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, smaller pieces of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seeds
are crushed
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machine
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processes
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seive
; being crushed
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, assemble to a cleaning step.

To proceed with the next
 step, the ground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seeds
are put
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dehuller
. Afterwards, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seeds
 are going to be flaked
 into smaller and thinner pieces prior to being cooked
 in a large cooking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
. Finally
, sunflower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withegggrainnutberrycorn
seeds
are pressed
 by a pressing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 to be a sunflower oil for sale. 