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The provided bar chart illustrates 3 primary exports fields of Southland in the period of 25 years till 2025 including economists’ estimating figures.

The provided bar chart illustrates 3 primary exports fields of Southland in the period of 25 years till 2025 including economists’ estimating figures. b28yQ
The provided bar chart illustrates 3 primary exports fields of Southland in the period of 25 years till 2025 including economists’ estimating figures. Generally, outbound tourism along with dairy products account for the highest numbers in the total bar chart, whereas the figures for protein-contained commodities are just recorded as half of the others. An upward trend is witnessed in the tourism aspect in order of time, initiating with the lowest 8 billion Euro in 2000 and ending with the highest predicted projection in 2025 which is 2 billion greater than that of the late 20th century years. However, meat-related goods suffer a moderate plunge during the timeframe where the largest scale reached 6 billion Euro in the first recorded year and fall to 5 billion 25 years later. Dairy stocks are considerately fluctuating compared to the other 2 fields in which the bottom statistics stood at 7 billion Euro from the beginning limestone; nonetheless, the top figure reached 10 billion in the current year. Yet, economists predict a small-scale drop in 2025 approximately at 9. 5 billion Euro.
The provided bar chart illustrates 3 primary exports fields of Southland in the period of 25 years till 2025 including economists’ estimating figures.

Generally
, outbound tourism along with dairy products account for the highest numbers in the total bar chart, whereas the figures for protein-contained commodities are
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recorded as half of the others.

An upward trend
is witnessed
in the tourism aspect in order of time, initiating with the lowest 8
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billion
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Euro
in 2000 and ending with the highest predicted projection in 2025 which is 2
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billion
greater than that of the late 20th century years.
However
, meat-related
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goods
suffer a moderate plunge during the timeframe where the largest scale reached 6
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billion
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Euro
in the
first
recorded
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and fall to 5
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billion
25 years later.

Dairy stocks are
considerately
fluctuating compared to the other 2 fields in which the bottom statistics stood at 7
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billion
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Euro
from the beginning limestone; nonetheless, the top figure reached 10
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billion
in the
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current
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year
.
Yet
, economists predict a
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-scale drop in 2025 approximately at 9. 5
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billion
Euro.
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IELTS academic The provided bar chart illustrates 3 primary exports fields of Southland in the period of 25 years till 2025 including economists’ estimating figures.

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