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water use purposes in six areas of the world .

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The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. There are three major usage of water like in industrial use, agriculture use and domestic use, but overall maximum usage in Agriculture after that in Industrial at the end the least use of water in Domestic. We saw from chart in North America maximum used of water in Industrial which 48% but in Domestic its 13% which is minimum usage, In South America its totally change here 71% in Agriculture and 10% in Industrial. Europe has different figures 53% used for industrial and only 15% in Domestic. Moreover, in Africa maximum use in Agriculture which clicking 84%, and only 7% for Industrial. Central Asia have the highest usage of water in Agriculture comparing with all six areas its 88% and minimum 5% in Industrial area. In the end southeast Asia where they used 81% of water in Agriculture and 7% used for Domestic. ◦
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IELTS academic water use purposes in six areas of the world.

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