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water use purposes in six areas of the world .

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The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. There are three major usage of water like in industrial use, agriculture use and domestic use, but overall maximum usage in Agriculture after that in Industrial at the end the least use of water in Domestic. We saw from chart in North America maximum used of water in Industrial which 48% but in Domestic its 13% which is minimum usage, In South America its totally change here 71% in Agriculture and 10% in Industrial. Europe has different figures 53% used for industrial and only 15% in Domestic. Moreover, in Africa maximum use in Agriculture which clicking 84%, and only 7% for Industrial. Central Asia have the highest usage of water in Agriculture comparing with all six areas its 88% and minimum 5% in Industrial area. In the end southeast Asia where they used 81% of water in Agriculture and 7% used for Domestic. ◦
The charts
show
the percentage of
water
used
for
different
purposes in six areas of the world.

There are three major
usage
of
water
like in
industrial
use
,
agriculture
use
and domestic
use
,
but
overall
maximum
usage
in
Agriculture
after that in
Industrial
at the
end
the least
use
of
water
in Domestic.

We
saw
from chart in North America maximum
used
of
water
in
Industrial
which 48%
but
in Domestic its 13% which is minimum
usage
, In South America its
totally
change
here 71% in
Agriculture
and 10% in
Industrial
. Europe has
different
figures 53%
used
for
industrial
and
only
15% in Domestic.

Moreover
, in Africa maximum
use
in
Agriculture
which clicking 84%, and
only
7% for
Industrial
. Central Asia have the highest
usage
of
water
in
Agriculture
comparing with all six areas its 88% and minimum 5% in
Industrial
area. In the
end
southeast Asia
where they
used
81% of
water
in
Agriculture
and 7%
used
for Domestic.

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IELTS academic water use purposes in six areas of the world.

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