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The diagram shows how rainwater os collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town

The diagram illustrated shows how rainwater is collected in an Australian town, and used as drinking water. The rainwater is collected, filtered and provided to the houses for drinking. Initially, the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected in the drain, which eventually runs down to the water filter. In this process, the water is filtered to remove any impurities. The clean water is sent to the tank for storage. The stored water goes to the water treatment plant, to add chemicals, and to ensure that the treated water is fit for people to drink. After the water is treated, the drinking water is led back to the houses in the town, where the people can use it to drink.

The diagram illustrated This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how rainwater is collected
 in an Australian town, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. The rainwater is collected
, filtered and provided to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 for drinking.

Initially
, the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected
 in the drain, which eventually
 runs down to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 filter. In this process, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is filtered
 to remove any impurities. The clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the tank for storage.

The stored You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 goes to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 treatment plant, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 chemicals, and to ensure that the treated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is fit
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to drink.

After the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is treated
, the drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is led
 back to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in the town, where the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it to drink. 