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The bar chart shows the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese (too fat or much too fat) in one country from 1965 to 2015. The pie chart shows the proportion of adults who were overweight, obese or severely obese in2015.

The two diagrams below give in data overweight phenomena, in which the bar chart stands for adults who are overweight in percentage, while the pie chart indicates weight range of adults. As it’s clear obese adult’s population has growth during the indicated period, on the other hand the obese group claims a third of whole society which is the majority of the pie chart. At the first, to start from bar chart, it’s completely feasible the capture the fact that the society has become fatter and fatter among the 1965 to 2015, although it owns an stable state between 1965 and 1985. After that, it begins to rise gradually from 1995 to 2015. Finally, as going through the pie chart which is refereeing to weight range, the obese people have got the biggest cut which is a little over a third of the chart, and the severely fat and also healthy group are located in second and third place which have approximately a little under a third. ۲۳: ۳۶

The two diagrams below give in data overweight phenomena, in

which the bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 stands for adults who are overweight in percentage, while

the pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 indicates weight range of adults. As it’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 obese adult’s

population has growth during the indicated period, on the other hand
 the obese

group claims a third of whole society which is the majority of the pie chart.

At the first
, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start


from bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
, it’s completely feasible the capture the fact that the society has

become fatter and fatter among the 1965 to 2015, although it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possesses
owns
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an
 stable

state between 1965 and 1985. After that, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 to rise gradually
 from 1995

to 2015.

Finally
, as going through

the pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 which is refereeing to weight range, the obese This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the

biggest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 which is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 over a third of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
, and the severely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and

also
 healthy group are located
 in second and third place which have approximately

a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 under a third. ۲۳: ۳۶