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The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The differences of water consumed for several sectors in six regions is showed in the pie charts. Obviously, Agriculture field becomes the highest of water used in the world, whereas those areas less utilize in Domestic. However, in Europe and North America, more of water are consumed in Industrial. Initially, under a half of water sources in North America is used for Industrial, and this is slightly less proportion than that in Europe, utilizing 53% of water, while there is 10% makes use of water in South America. The majority of water is putted on Agriculture by 71% in Latin America, and this area shows twice as much proportion water than those in other regions, having 39% and 32%. However, Utilizing water for Domestic used becomes the lowest percentages in these areas. In Central Asia, South East Asia and Africa, the dominant of water are taken by Agriculture subject, and these account for more than four-fifths. The latter country experiences with other places, using water source for Domestic subject with a very small proportion. Also, the first area is less utilizing water for Industrial and almost the same percentage with another place, at over 5%, whereas this sector in Africa reveal almost twofold.
The differences of
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consumed for several sectors in six regions is
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showed
in the pie charts.

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, Agriculture field becomes the highest of
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water
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used
in the world, whereas those areas less utilize in Domestic.
However
, in Europe and North America, more of
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water
are consumed
in Industrial.

Initially
, under a half of
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water
sources in North America is
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used
for Industrial, and this is
slightly
less proportion than that in Europe, utilizing 53% of
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water
, while there is 10%
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makes
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use
of
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in South America. The majority of
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is putted
on Agriculture by 71% in Latin America, and this area
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shows
twice as much proportion
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water
than those in other regions, having 39% and 32%.
However
, Utilizing
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water
for Domestic
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used
becomes the lowest percentages in these areas.

In Central Asia, South East Asia and Africa, the dominant of
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water
are taken
by Agriculture subject, and these account for more than four-fifths. The latter country experiences with other places, using
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water
source for Domestic subject with a
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very
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small
proportion.
Also
, the
first
area is less utilizing
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for Industrial and almost the same percentage with another place, at over 5%, whereas this sector in Africa reveal almost twofold.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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