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The given image illustrates the production of photographs using digital photographic equipment. Overall, it is obvious that the process of producing a black and white photo includes many complicated steps namely capturing, recording, editing, and printing. At the beginning, images are captured by the digital camera and the data are stored on a smart card. Next these photos are downloaded to the computer for editing. At this step, images are developed on computer where these images can be cut to adjust the right size, improved the quality of pictures and then they are formatted. The edited images can be sent by email or stored in compact disc. The edited images are printed onto sheets of photo paper and transferred to the printer which can print both color or black and white photos depending on customer’s demand. Finally, the finished black and white or color photos can be removed from the printer.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturephotographlikenessformfigureappearance
image
 illustrates the production of photographs using digital photographic equipment.

Overall
, it is obvious that the process of producing a black and white You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturelikenessimagesnapshotprintportrait
photo
 includes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 complicated steps namely
 capturing, recording, editing, and printing.

At the beginning, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturephotographlikenessformfigureappearance
images
are captured
 by the digital camera and the data are stored
 on a smart card. Next
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturelikenessimagesnapshotprintportrait
photos
are downloaded
 to the computer for editing. At this step, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturephotographlikenessformfigureappearance
images
are developed
 on computer where these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturephotographlikenessformfigureappearance
images
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 to adjust the right size, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 the quality of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).pictures, and
pictures and
 then they are formatted
. The edited You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturephotographlikenessformfigureappearance
images
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 by email or stored in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Compact Disc
compact disc
.

The edited You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturephotographlikenessformfigureappearance
images
are printed
 onto sheets of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturelikenessimagesnapshotprintportrait
photo
 paper and transferred to the printer which can print both color or black and white You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturelikenessimagesnapshotprintportrait
photos
 depending on customer’s demand. Finally
, the finished black and white or color You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturelikenessimagesnapshotprintportrait
photos
 can be removed
 from the printer. 