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the diagram shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment

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The given image illustrates the production of photographs using digital photographic equipment. Overall, it is obvious that the process of producing a black and white photo includes many complicated steps namely capturing, recording, editing, and printing. At the beginning, images are captured by the digital camera and the data are stored on a smart card. Next these photos are downloaded to the computer for editing. At this step, images are developed on computer where these images can be cut to adjust the right size, improved the quality of pictures and then they are formatted. The edited images can be sent by email or stored in compact disc. The edited images are printed onto sheets of photo paper and transferred to the printer which can print both color or black and white photos depending on customer’s demand. Finally, the finished black and white or color photos can be removed from the printer.
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illustrates the production of photographs using digital photographic equipment.

Overall
, it is obvious that the process of producing a black and white
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photo
includes
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many
complicated steps
namely
capturing, recording, editing, and printing.

At the beginning,
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images
are captured
by the digital camera and the data
are stored
on a smart card.
Next
these
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photos
are downloaded
to the computer for editing. At this step,
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images
are developed
on computer where these
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images
can be
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cut
to adjust the right size,
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improved
the quality of
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pictures and
then they
are formatted
. The edited
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images
can be
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sent
by email or stored in
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compact disc
.

The edited
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images
are printed
onto sheets of
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photo
paper and transferred to the printer which can print both color or black and white
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photos
depending on customer’s demand.
Finally
, the finished black and white or color
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photos
can
be removed
from the printer.
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IELTS academic the diagram shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment

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6.0
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