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the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The line graph illustrates the amount of energy consumed in the USA from 1980 with prediction until 2030. Overall, the consumption of fossil fuels especially petrol and oil compared to other sources, for producing energy has been the most since 1980 and likewise, it is expected to be the largest until 2030. Regarding fossil fuels, the source of energy petrol and oil which stood at 35q in 1980, has risen and is likely to continue and reach around 50q. Coal and natural gas approximately were the second source of energy between 1980 and 2015, then after 2015 consumption of energy by coal unlike gas has increased, then will climb by about 5 unit and will lay in second place lonely in the future, whilst gas is projected to stay steady at 25q. Turning to renewable energy, the amount of usage of nuclear, solar/wind, has witnessed slightly climbed from 4q to more or less 5q and will go up gently, nuclear will be more than others. In contrast, there was not a considerable change in using hydropower energy and fluctuated around 4q and have been set to maintain at the same amount by 2030.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
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energy
consumed in the USA from 1980 with prediction until 2030.

Overall
, the consumption of fossil fuels
especially
petrol and oil compared to other sources, for producing
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energy
has been the most since 1980 and
likewise
, it is
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expected
to be the largest until 2030.

Regarding fossil fuels, the source of
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petrol and oil which stood at 35q in 1980, has risen and is likely to continue and reach around 50q. Coal and natural gas approximately were the second source of
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energy
between 1980 and 2015, then after 2015 consumption of
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energy
by coal unlike gas has increased, then will climb by about 5 unit and will lay in second place lonely in the future, whilst gas
is projected
to stay steady at 25q.

Turning to renewable
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energy
, the amount of usage of nuclear, solar/wind, has witnessed
slightly
climbed from 4q to more or less 5q and will go up
gently
, nuclear will be more than others.
In contrast
, there was not a considerable
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change
in using hydropower
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energy
and fluctuated around 4q and have
been set
to maintain at the same amount by 2030.

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