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The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

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The diagram illustrates the process of power generation through the use of water. Overall, it is evident that the given puores is manmade in nature. The process begins with the water storage and ends with the people generation. There is total six steps in the process which includes water storage, production of electricity and distribution. Looking at the details, the process begins with the water stored in the dam's reservoir. Then it flows into penstock through the help of intake which is the opening of reservoir. Before reaching to the river, water hits the bladder of turbine. Considering the other factors, owing to the movement of turbine, the generation of electricity embark in the powerhouse. At last, the electricity generates and supplies to the long distance power cable.

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Considering the other factors, owing to the movement of turbine, the generation of electricity embark in the powerhouse. At last, the electricity generates and supplies to the long distance power cable. 