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The table gives information about the average hours spent on Internet by European people of different age groups

The table gives information about the average hours spent on Internet by European people of different age groups PdMJ
The table illustrates the maximum hours expended on the internet by European citizens of various age categories Overall, the highest number of males is placed in 16 to 20 years, while female category stant this period, but one hour less. To begin with, from 11 to 15 male ages spend 8 hours a week, while women spend 6 hours for this period. The next age categories spend their the most time for online life, who is male teenagers expand 19 hours, while female teenagers spend 18 hours a daily week. Turning to the other age groups, between 21 and 25 male adults spend 7 hours, and women internet users expend 5 hours a day. The next internet users spend equal hours. The middle age categories, namely, between 31 and 50, both spend 3 and 4 hours respectively. The oldest age group both expand 2 and 3 hours respectively.
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expended on the internet by European citizens of various
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a week, while women
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6
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a daily week.

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groups, between 21 and 25 male adults
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7
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, and women internet users expend 5
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