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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. gXbd
The line graph encapsulates the proportion of the Australian unemployemnt issue during the year 2012. it is measured in percentage. Overall, they are separated into two categories rural areas and urban areas, it seems that rural areas is tend to have more people, who not having jpob than Urban areas, in the first period of time, it standing the top, while until the end of the years it still excced the highest number. for the first quarter of the year, Rural areas it started with about 6. 5 percent, while it starting to drop slight until the second part of the year, urban areas it rose gradually to 4 percent during the second time After along months of decreasing, it starts to rise slowly then drop abit at halves of the third period of the year to 5%, and it remained quite stalised through the period. looking at the urban areas, it fall significanly back to the same amount of unemployments as it was in the first quarter in above 2%, even thought it declined slightly in the fourth time frame at approximately 3. 8%, it increased back to the higest number, that it never exceed before, nearly 5%
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unemployemnt
issue during the
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year
2012.
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it
is measured
in percentage.

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into two categories rural
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areas
and
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urban
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areas
, it seems that rural
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areas
is
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people
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jpob
than
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Urban
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areas
, in the
first
period of time,
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it standing
the top, while until the
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end
of the years it
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excced
the highest number.

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for
the
first
quarter of the
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year
, Rural
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it
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started
with about 6. 5 percent, while it starting to drop slight until the second part of the
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,
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urban
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it rose
gradually
to 4 percent during the second time

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abit
at halves of the third period of the
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year
to 5%, and it remained quite
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stalised
through the period.
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looking
at the
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urban
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, it
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significanly
back to the same amount of
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unemployments
as it was in the
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quarter in above 2%, even
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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