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The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world. pgX9

The table depicts informaion about the monthly rainfall for a year in 5 different cities in the world. : In general, Hong Kong and Tokyo have the heaviest falls from May to Sep, there is an opposite trend in Jakarta, Cairo and London. However compering the amount, Hong Kong and Tokyo have the larges rainfall on the end of the Summer time to the middle time of the Autume, Jakarta begin the rain season from the open years, Cairo receives merely scant of rain, where as London modest. Looking now at the Asian cities more specifically, right from the first month, Hong Kong had the smallest rainfall at 25mm, this number increased gradually and peaked at 375 in June. It rained more than the other countries for about 2 to 4 times. Jakarta are only slightly less at 300, Tokyo being lower, yet substantial, at about 190 reinfall. Moving to Cairo, is the least rainfall, indicating a dryness in the country, with August alone reaching a high point of 27mm. As for London, the highest rainfall can be seen in January at 80mm, after that, it begin to increased to 68, and to the end of the year it grew up to 79mm.

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