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The given Bar graph illustrates the information about the percentage of both gender holding tertiary educational qualification in five nation in 2001.the data is calibrated in percentum

The given Bar graph illustrates the information about the percentage of both gender holding tertiary educational qualification in five nation in 2001. the data is calibrated in percentum KJy9
The given Bar graph illustrates the information about the percentage of both gender holding tertiary educational qualification in five nation in 2001. the data is calibrated in percentum It can be clearly seen that, the figure of female spending 25%on Japan as opposed to United States at just less than half whereas the ratio for women in Switzerland went up dramatically to 35%, the percentage in Britain plummeted to 30%at the same time.
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Bar graph illustrates the information about the percentage of both gender holding tertiary educational qualification in five
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in 2001.
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data
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percentum
It can be
clearly
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seen
that, the figure of female spending 25%on Japan as opposed
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to United States
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less than half whereas the ratio for women in Switzerland went up
dramatically
to 35%, the percentage in Britain plummeted to 30%at the same time.
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IELTS academic The given Bar graph illustrates the information about the percentage of both gender holding tertiary educational qualification in five nation in 2001. the data is calibrated in percentum

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