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The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.

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The given diagram illustrates the production of coffee. Overall, there are a total of 10 stages in order to make a cup of delicious coffee. Cultivating is the first stage, then the beans were processed, lastly we can enjoy the coffee after brewing. Firstly, the beans are cultivated in the farm, then, they are picked up by farmers with their hands before being processed with 2 different methods either dry or wet. After that the beans will be milled using a milling machine. After this, the beans are shipped to the coffee factory for further processing. They are roasted and then grinded in a grinding machine before they are packed into beautiful pakages. Finally the coffee is consumed after brewing with a coffee machine.
The
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given
diagram illustrates the production of coffee.

Overall
, there are a total of 10 stages in order to
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make
a cup of delicious
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coffee
. Cultivating is the
first
stage, then the
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beans
were processed
,
lastly
we can enjoy the
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coffee
after brewing.

Firstly
, the
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beans
are cultivated
in the farm, then, they
are picked
up by farmers with their hands
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before
being processed
with 2
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different
methods either dry or wet.
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After
that the
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beans
will
be milled
using a milling machine.

After this, the
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beans
are shipped
to the
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coffee
factory for
further
processing. They
are roasted
and then
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grinded
in a grinding machine
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before
they
are packed
into
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beautiful
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pakages
.
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Finally
the
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coffee
is consumed
after brewing with a
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coffee
machine.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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