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Looking at the graph, the first thing you notice is that water is used for industry the most in Australia and Canada. It's also interesting to see that in New Zealand, the highest water use is fir agriculture. A final point to note is that domestic water use is the lowest in all countries.

Looking at the graph, the first thing you notice is that water is used for industry the most in Australia and Canada. It's also interesting to see that in New Zealand, the highest water use is fir agriculture. A final point to note is that domestic water use is the lowest in all countries. XG7YA
Looking at the graph, the first thing you can notice is that the water is used for industry the most in Australia and Canada. It's also interesting to see that in New Zealand, the highest water use is for agriculture. A final point to note is that the domestic water use is the lowest in all countries.
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thing you can notice is that the water is
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for industry the most in Australia and Canada.

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also
interesting to
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see
that in New Zealand, the highest water
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use
is for agriculture.

A final point to note is that the domestic water
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use
is the lowest in all countries.
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IELTS academic Looking at the graph, the first thing you notice is that water is used for industry the most in Australia and Canada. It's also interesting to see that in New Zealand, the highest water use is fir agriculture. A final point to note is that domestic water use is the lowest in all countries.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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