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The diagram shows about typical steps of consumer goods manufacturing and information back to earlier stages for enable goods.

The diagram shows about typical steps of consumer goods manufacturing and information back to earlier stages for enable goods. kQ1e
The given flowchart illustrates the information about complex steps who consumes goods manufacturing and includes information back to the stages to alteration for goods. To commence with, raw materials and manufacture components are already produced together in a storage. Next, the product research is carried out the design and then pass into production planning and include in storage. After that, production planning is divided into various stages like assembly, analysis. Move further to diagram, testing is carried out through the design. Probing ahead, market research pass the information to design for improvements and moving further to packaging stage. Thereafter, goods for transportation and sales pass market research. Finally sales passing the production planning for the public response. Overall, it is crystal clear that manufacturing process is complicated, whereas, information process ends with the advertising.
The
given
flowchart illustrates the
information
about complex steps who consumes
goods
manufacturing and includes
information
back to the stages to alteration for
goods
. To commence with, raw materials and manufacture components are already produced together in a storage.
Next
, the product research
is carried
out the design and then pass into production planning and include in storage. After that, production planning
is divided
into various stages like assembly, analysis.
Move
further
to diagram, testing
is carried
out through the design. Probing ahead, market research pass the
information
to design for improvements and moving
further
to packaging stage. Thereafter,
goods
for transportation and sales pass market research.
Finally
sales passing the production planning for the public response.
Overall
, it is crystal
clear
that manufacturing process
is complicated
, whereas,
information
process ends with the advertising.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows about typical steps of consumer goods manufacturing and information back to earlier stages for enable goods.

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