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The diagram show three solutions locations for a leisure centre. Overall, in the north of the map, location B is almost possible to build a leisure centre because of standing near by resident's living. The location A has a factory which next to a river. It was built in the east of the map. As you can see, this factory dominic a large of area. If we built the leisure centre, it will be noise from the factory. In centre of the map. Location B is ability to build a leisure centre. Because it is near the residential, so the city dwellers have a area to play. This area is the highest ability to build a leisure centre for this town. In the west of the map, location C is near the woods. This area this the lowest ability to build a leisure centre because this area is not crown enough to build a leisure centre. So the location B is the area has enough solution and ability to build the leisure centre.
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