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The given map reveals that three different destinations where leisure facility is considered to be built.

The given map reveals that three different destinations where leisure facility is considered to be built. gqpQa

The given map reveals that three different destinations where leisure facility is considered to be built. Overall, it can be observed that location 'B' is located in the centre of the destinations and there are three buildings already established. Region 'A', on the other hand, is an industrial area while 'C' is undeveloped yet. To begin with, area 'B' is placed in the main zone that people can easy to visit there due to road connection and accommodation system. Therefore, it is by far a suitable place for the leisure centre. However, on the other hand, it is clear that there are some manufactories in the zone 'A' and environmental issues such as air pollution and emission are considered. Turning to the 'C' area, it preserves nature environments like forests and trees. this place is not only a good location for the leisure centre but also the best condition for visitors that can get fresh air. Despite the advantages of this area, the destruction of the environment would be a significant problem.

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given
 map reveals that three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 destinations where leisure facility is considered
 to be built
.

Overall
, it can be observed
 that location 'B' is located
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the destinations and there are three buildings already established. Region 'A', on the other hand
, is an industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 while 'C' is undeveloped
yet
.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 'B' is placed
 in the main zone that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can easy to visit there due to road connection and accommodation system. Therefore
, it is by far a suitable place for the leisure Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. However
, on the other hand
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.manufactures
manufactories
 in the zone 'A' and environmental issues such as air pollution and emission are considered
.

Turning to the 'C' You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, it preserves nature environments like forests and trees. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 place is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 location for the leisure Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the best condition for visitors that can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 fresh air. Despite the advantages of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, the destruction of the environment would be a significant problem. 