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The given map reveals that three different destinations where leisure facility is considered to be built.

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The given map reveals that three different destinations where leisure facility is considered to be built. Overall, it can be observed that location 'B' is located in the centre of the destinations and there are three buildings already established. Region 'A', on the other hand, is an industrial area while 'C' is undeveloped yet. To begin with, area 'B' is placed in the main zone that people can easy to visit there due to road connection and accommodation system. Therefore, it is by far a suitable place for the leisure centre. However, on the other hand, it is clear that there are some manufactories in the zone 'A' and environmental issues such as air pollution and emission are considered. Turning to the 'C' area, it preserves nature environments like forests and trees. this place is not only a good location for the leisure centre but also the best condition for visitors that can get fresh air. Despite the advantages of this area, the destruction of the environment would be a significant problem.
The
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given
map reveals that three
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different
destinations where leisure facility
is considered
to
be built
.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that location 'B'
is located
in the
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centre
of the destinations and there are three buildings already established. Region 'A',
on the other hand
, is an industrial
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area
while 'C'
is undeveloped
yet
.

To
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begin
with,
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area
'B'
is placed
in the main zone that
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people
can easy to visit there due to road connection and accommodation system.
Therefore
, it is by far a suitable place for the leisure
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centre
.
However
,
on the other hand
, it is
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clear
that there are
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some
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manufactories
in the zone 'A' and environmental issues such as air pollution and emission
are considered
.

Turning to the 'C'
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area
, it preserves nature environments like forests and trees.
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this
place is not
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only
a
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good
location for the leisure
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centre
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but
also
the best condition for visitors that can
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get
fresh air. Despite the advantages of this
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area
, the destruction of the environment would be a significant problem.

IELTS academic The given map reveals that three different destinations where leisure facility is considered to be built.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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