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The table show the average number of students taught by each lecturer in Australian universities from 1991 to 2007

The table show the average number of students taught by each lecturer in Australian universities from 1991 to 2007 VPj9w

These two tables provides data about student to faculty ratio in Australian universities between 1991 to 2007. Overall, the ratio of students are shotting up gradually every year compare to instructors in class with time. It is noticeable that, their was substantial growth in number of pupils with acceleration of average 2. 0 student in every five year gap for 16 years. Year 1991, 1995, 1999, 2003 and 2007 with 12. 3, 14. 4, 17. 1, 19. 8 and 21. 6 students respectively. In second table, data of laboratory and lecture based classes are provided for 2001, where their was disparity of 2 students between educational and sociological lectures where pupils are 22. 5 and 24. 2 per lecturer respectively. Moreover their was relatively higher work load on theory lecturer compare to practical teacher of laboratory. The ratio of pupils in science and agriculture laboratories are same with 14 students on a single practical tutor.

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