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The diagram illustrates how university sports court looked like in 1990 and the modification that took place. One of the first thing to note is that there were less courts in 1990.

The diagram illustrates how university sports court looked like in 1990 and the modification that took place. One of the first thing to note is that there were less courts in 1990. 0aDrQ
The diagram illustrates how university sports court looked like in 1990 and the modification that took place. One of the first thing to note is that there were less courts in 1990. An additional basketball court has also been constructed. It is generally true to say that the current plan of the court is using all the space appropriately. The changing room is located in the center of the park which is an ideal thing. Previously there was an outside pool but they changed it to an indoor pool which is convenient for a number of swimmer. The tennis court is shifted to the left side of the park and there are two additional courts. In the park there is a fitness center. It is vital for all the athletes. Cafe and reception are in the same posotion. One of the draw back in the new plan is that there is no dedicated space for parking. To conclude, we can say that the new ground and all the modifications that took place were appropriate and helped in using the space in an efficient manner.
The diagram illustrates how university sports
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court
looked like in 1990 and the modification that took place. One of the
first
thing to note is that there were
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less
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courts
in 1990. An additional basketball
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court
has
also
been constructed
.

It is
generally
true to say that the
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current
plan of the
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court
is using all the space
appropriately
. The changing room
is located
in the center of the park which is an ideal thing. Previously there was an outside pool
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but
they
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changed
it to an indoor pool which is convenient for a number of swimmer. The tennis
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court
is shifted
to the
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left
side of the park and there are two additional courts.

In the park there is a fitness center. It is vital for all the athletes.
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
and reception are in the same
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posotion
. One of the draw back in the new plan is that there is no dedicated space for parking.
To conclude
, we can say that the new ground and all the modifications that took place were appropriate and
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helped
in using the space
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in an efficient manner
.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how university sports court looked like in 1990 and the modification that took place. One of the first thing to note is that there were less courts in 1990.

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