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the diagram show the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summerise the the diagram

the diagram show the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summerise the the diagram Mo9bp
The diagram illustrate the process of recycling the aluminium cans. The process contains several steps begins with collection of used cans to recycled cans. It is manifest that development of cans need lots of machinery. The operation begins with the collection of used cans from dustbin and drive it ti factory through huge truck. In the factory, the cans have to pass via 4 stages. The first is cleaning second is sorting in which the different kind of cans are separated. after that shredding and compressing perform on the cans. Then this cans put into machine in which it is melt through heat. This liquid pour into another machine that transfer it into rolling sheet of dimension of 2. 5mm-6mm thick. In last second stage sticker of difference brands. After that the aluminium cans departure for the reuse. The most prominent feature of the diagram is that it mentioned that UK uses 74% recycled cans overall the reaction of aluminium cans contains complex procedure and maximum amount of time
The diagram
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illustrate
the process of recycling the
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cans
. The process contains several steps
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begins
with collection of
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used
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cans
to recycled cans.

It is manifest that development of
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cans
need lots of machinery.

The operation
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begins
with the collection of
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used
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cans
from dustbin and drive it ti factory through huge truck. In the factory, the
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cans
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have to
pass via 4 stages.

The
first
is cleaning second is sorting in which the
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different
kind of
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cans
are separated
.
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after
that shredding and compressing perform on the
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cans
. Then this
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cans
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put


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into
machine in which it is
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melt
through heat. This liquid pour into another machine that transfer it into rolling sheet of dimension of 2.
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5mm
-6mm thick. In
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last


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second
stage sticker of difference brands. After that the
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aluminium
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cans
departure for the reuse.

The most prominent feature of the diagram is that it mentioned that UK
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uses
74% recycled
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cans
overall
the reaction of
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aluminium
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cans
contains complex

procedure and maximum amount of time

IELTS academic the diagram show the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summerise the the diagram

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168 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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