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The process shows diamonds moving from the mine to the retailer. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given sequential diagram illustrates the steps involved in the process of getting diamonds from a mine to the ones who are selling them. Overall, it is clear that the mined rough diamonds are categorized according to their quality. Low grade diamonds are passed through less number of stages as compared to the high quality diamonds. To begin with, the diamonds are mined in their rough form following which they are stored and then sorted into two different grades namely, low grade and high grade. Low graded rough diamonds are set aside for industrial purposes, after which they are cut and shaped, then assessed for their level of hardness. The final step before being sent to the retailers is the pricing. On the contrary, the high graded rough diamonds are sent to the cosmic users where their prices are determined and analyzed digitally by the computer for the most effective cut. After analyzing they are either cut by hand or by machine before polishing. The polished diamonds are then rated and the best rated diamonds are sent to the retailers while the diamonds with low ratings are sent again for polishing to increase their rating for sale.

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diamonds
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Low
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grade
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diamonds
are passed
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different
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 to the retailers is the pricing.

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diamonds
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