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The bar chart represents the distribution of two sets of voters according to six levels of education in the USA.

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The bar chart represents the distribution of two sets of voters according to six levels of education in the USA. Generally speaking, it is clear that while the percentage of republicans were more than democrats in most educational levels, the voter gap for each degree was not significant with the notable exception of no high school, where less republicans had not finished high school than their democrat counterparts by almost one to two. Regarding achieving certificate by democrats, the least attracted qualification was postgraduate, only degree with more democrats than republicans at a ratio of 20 to 17 percent. College-related learning was the most popular level of education for democrat voters with the higher rate of 25%. However, it seems that approximately 4% of democrats did not tend to complete high school ages. Looking specifically at republicans graduated percentage, a higher proportion of republicans obtained more than democrats across four of the five categories. Similarly, republican voters were also drawn to college-related learning with an achievement rate of 30% for both some college and graduated from college. With regard to the least attractive degree، postgraduate had roughly less than 20 percent students graduated.
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according to six levels of education in the USA.

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speaking, it is
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clear
that while the percentage of
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republicans
were more than
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democrats
in most educational levels, the
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voter
gap for each degree was not significant with the notable exception of no high school, where
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less
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had not finished high school than their
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counterparts by almost one to two.

Regarding achieving certificate by
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, the least attracted qualification was postgraduate,
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only
degree with more
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democrats
than
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republicans
at a ratio of 20 to 17 percent. College-related learning was the most popular level of education for
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democrat
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voters
with the higher rate of 25%.
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, it seems that approximately 4% of
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democrats
did not tend to complete high school ages.

Looking
specifically
at
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republicans
graduated percentage, a higher proportion of
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republicans
obtained more than
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democrats
across four of the five categories.
Similarly
,
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republican
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voters
were
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drawn to college-related learning with an achievement rate of 30% for both
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college and graduated from college. With regard to the least attractive
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postgraduate had roughly less than 20 percent students graduated.
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IELTS academic The bar chart represents the distribution of two sets of voters according to six levels of education in the USA.

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