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The diagram provided illustrates the process of how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. The process consists of nine different stages in order to produce ethanol.

The diagram provided illustrates the process of how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. The process consists of nine different stages in order to produce ethanol. Mm9M9
The diagram provided illustrates the process of how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. The process consists of nine different stages in order to produce ethanol. Firstly, corn is gathered and secondly it is stored in a place. Thirdly, with the stored corn, milling activity takes place. Fourthly, cooking milled corn in addition with water for four hours is performed. Fifthly, the fermenting process for cooked corn is done for forty eight hours. Next, separating activity takes apart. After, from the separated corn, the ethanol fuel is extracted. Before transporting, all the ethanol fuel is stored. Finally, the stored ethanol fuel is being transported to different places.
The diagram provided illustrates the process of how
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ethanol
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fuel
is produced
from corn.

The process consists of nine
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different
stages in order to produce ethanol.

Firstly
,
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corn
is gathered
and
secondly
it
is stored
in a place.
Thirdly
, with the stored
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corn
, milling activity takes place.
Fourthly
, cooking milled
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corn
in addition
with water for four hours
is performed
.
Fifthly
, the fermenting process for cooked
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corn
is done
for
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forty eight
hours.
Next
, separating activity takes apart. After, from the separated
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corn
, the
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ethanol
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fuel
is extracted
.
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Before
transporting, all the
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ethanol
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fuel
is stored
.
Finally
, the stored
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ethanol
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fuel
is
being transported
to
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different
places.
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IELTS academic The diagram provided illustrates the process of how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. The process consists of nine different stages in order to produce ethanol.

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