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The chart shows men and women proficient in foreign language in several countries.Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table graph illustrates the information about both genders whom are expert in six different nations. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, the maximum girls and boys are skilled in non-native language from Romania and India. However, least experienced learners from China and Thailand. The highest proportion of skilled graduates males are 56% and approximately 68% females in India. Second greatest ratio of capable men is 42% which two-fold less from women who has been living in Romania, Whereas near about 35% masculine and 56%feminine from vietnam. Russia has both trained males and females display 35% and 42%, Respectively. As regard China, 16% men and 30% women who have proficient. Thailand has expert stern sex in alien language, accounted for 29% and proximity 27% fair sex skilled in exotic language.
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, least experienced learners from China and Thailand.

The highest proportion of skilled graduates males are 56% and approximately 68% females in India. Second greatest ratio of capable
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. Russia has both trained males and females display 35% and 42%,
Respectively
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As regard China, 16%
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and 30% women who have proficient. Thailand has expert stern sex in alien language, accounted for 29% and proximity 27%
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skilled in exotic language.
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IELTS academic The chart shows men and women proficient in foreign language in several countries. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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