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information what Anthropology from one university did after finshing their undergraduate degree course and the income of Anthropologists in the workplace after five years.

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The charts outline information about what Anthropology graduates from one university performed after completing their undergraduate degree program, as well as the income of Anthropologists in the workplace after five years. Overall, as can be seen from the chart the percentage of people working is the greatest. Especially, the government pays the highest compensation to its employees. Looking at the first chart in more detail, the figure for full time work is 52% whereas the percentage of part time work and postgrap study are lower than that with 5%. While, 8% is seen in the data of full time postgrap and not known. Next, the ratios of part time work and unemployment range from 12% to 15%. Followed by the next chart, the percentage of salary which Freelance consultants pay for workers is 40% while the proportion of the government sector salary is 50%. 30% is seen in the figure for private companies' salary which is the lowest.
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outline information about what Anthropology graduates from one university performed after completing their undergraduate degree program,
as well
as the income of Anthropologists in the workplace after five years.

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the percentage of
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working is the greatest.
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, the
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pays the highest compensation to its employees.

Looking at the
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in more detail, the figure for full
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time
work is 52% whereas the percentage of part
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work and
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study are lower than that with 5%. While, 8% is
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in the data of full
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and not known.
Next
, the ratios of part
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work and unemployment range from 12% to 15%.

Followed by the
next
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, the percentage of salary which Freelance consultants pay for workers is 40% while the proportion of the
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government
sector salary is 50%. 30% is
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in the figure for private
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companies
' salary which is the lowest.
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IELTS academic information what Anthropology from one university did after finshing their undergraduate degree course and the income of Anthropologists in the workplace after five years.

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