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The diagram portrays an island proper and after the construction of the accommodation for the guests.

The diagram portrays an island proper and after the construction of the accommodation for the guests. L9LG3
The diagram portrays an island proper and after the construction of the accommodation for the guests. Overall, by having a more meticulous review it is evident that there was radical alteration in the landscape with the new built facilities for the guests. On one hand, at first glance the number of the small cottages build is noticeable along with the reception office was also created for guests to register and a restaurant. A pier was also made for the people coming with their boats or the ones who wants to have ride. Pavement and roads were also constructed making it easier for going between the facilities of the isle. On the other hand, however, the amount of the trees did not change despite the multiple buildings that were build up near them. Even though, the beach also stands at its original form tourist are permitted to swim and spend high quality time there.
The diagram portrays an island proper and after the construction of the accommodation for the guests.
Overall
, by having a more meticulous review it is evident that there was radical alteration in the landscape with the new built facilities for the guests.

On one hand, at
first
glance the number of the
small
cottages build is noticeable along with the reception office was
also
created for guests to register and a restaurant. A pier was
also
made for the
people
coming with their boats or the ones who
wants
to have ride. Pavement and roads were
also
constructed making it easier for going between the facilities of the isle.

On the other hand
,
however
, the amount of the trees did not
change
despite the multiple buildings that were build up near them.
Even though
, the beach
also
stands at its original form tourist
are permitted
to swim and spend high quality time there.

IELTS academic The diagram portrays an island proper and after the construction of the accommodation for the guests.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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