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The two diagrams show different information between Australia's population and other nationalities and some places. Overall, while Australia is the highest population, Dutch is the latest. Regarding about nation, Australia is also at the top, followed by the Dutch, British, New Zealanders; in the end, the Chinese is the national ranking at the last position. As shown in the pie chart, Australia is the most population, 73%. Next, the other is 14%, which is twice as large as the British, at 7%. Then, finally, the remaining part of the pie chart, namely New Zealander, Chinese, and Dutch, is responsible for 3%, 2%, and 1%, respectively. In terms of the table, about the countryside, Australian 20-fold is as large as Chinese and has the most countryside, 20%, which is followed by the Dutch, British and New Zealander at 17%, 11%, and 10%, respectively. About the city, all of the figures of these nations are over 80%, but Chinese have the most cities, at 99%.
The two diagrams
show
different
information between Australia's population and other nationalities and
some
places.

Overall
, while Australia is the highest population, Dutch is the latest. Regarding about nation, Australia is
also
at the top, followed by the Dutch, British, New Zealanders; in the
end
, the Chinese is the national ranking at the last position.

As shown in the pie chart, Australia is the most population, 73%.
Next
, the other is 14%, which is twice as large as the British, at 7%. Then,
finally
, the remaining part of the pie chart,
namely
New
Zealander
, Chinese, and Dutch, is responsible for 3%, 2%, and 1%,
respectively
.

In terms of the table, about the countryside, Australian 20-fold is as large as Chinese and has the most countryside, 20%, which
is followed
by the Dutch, British and New
Zealander
at 17%, 11%, and 10%,
respectively
. About the city,
all of the
figures of these nations are over 80%,
but
Chinese have the most cities, at 99%.
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