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The chart below shows attitudes towards culture and cultural activities in New Zeland.

The chart below shows attitudes towards culture and cultural activities in New Zeland. VYyyK
The bar graph illustrates tendency towards other and culture activities in New Zealand. It is clear from the chart that majority of people who strongly agree to extra curriculum activities participation by children. It is immediately seen that the percentage of people who believe cultural performances aid improvements in people’s lives is the same as the people who believe such activities bring them together. Just over one-third of people who slightly agree to these activities. The next is people’s belief towards other activities. There is a striking difference between the people who strongly agree sporting activities are more vital than cultural one and people who believe children should participate in art and music activities. The figure for these is almost a quarter and almost three-quarter respectively. 1 in every 10 people strongly agree that they do not have knowledge of country’s cultural activities. Overall, It can be seen that most people strongly agree to children participation to various activities at 74%.
The bar graph illustrates tendency towards other and culture
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in New Zealand. It is
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from the chart that majority of
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people
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who
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strongly
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agree
to extra curriculum
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activities
participation by children.

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that the percentage of
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people
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believe cultural performances aid improvements in
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people’s
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lives
is the same as the
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believe such
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bring them together.
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people
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slightly
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to these activities.

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people’s
belief towards other
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. There is a striking difference between the
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people
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sporting
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are more vital than cultural one and
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people
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who
believe children should participate in art and music
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activities
. The figure for
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almost a quarter and almost three-quarter
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1 in every 10
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people
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that they do not have knowledge of country’s cultural activities.

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to children participation to various
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at 74%.
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