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Life cycle of Frogs from birth to maturity

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The diagram depicts the life cycle of frogs, from birth to maturity. It is clear that a frog undergoes various stages in its life cycle from the stage of eggs to the stage of adult frog. The life cycle of a frog takes place in a pond. Firstly, the life cycle of frog begins with the laying of eggs by an adult frog. Secondly, an embryo is formed by the fusion of the egg and male gamete. The embryo eventually develops into a tadpole which cling to the water plants. Then the tadpole develops external gills which help in breathing and the tail keeps on growing. In the next stage, the hindlegs appear and the tadpole survives from the food stored in the tail. Following the development of hindlegs, front legs appear and gradually the tail becomes shorter. At this stage in the life cycle, the tadpole is called young frog. Finally the young frog develops into an adult frog and the life cycle continues again.
The diagram depicts the
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of
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, from birth to maturity. It is
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clear
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frog
undergoes various
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in its
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life
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from the
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stage
of eggs to the
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stage
of adult
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frog
. The
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of a
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frog
takes place in a pond.
Firstly
, the
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of
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frog
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begins
with the laying of eggs by an adult
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frog
.
Secondly
, an embryo
is formed
by the fusion of the egg and male gamete. The embryo
eventually
develops into a
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tadpole
which cling to the water plants. Then the
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tadpole
develops external gills which
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help
in breathing and the tail
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keeps
on growing. In the
next
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stage
, the
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hindlegs
appear and the
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tadpole
survives from the food stored in the tail. Following the development of
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hindlegs
, front legs appear and
gradually
the tail becomes shorter. At this
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in the
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life
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cycle
, the
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tadpole
is called
young
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frog
.
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Finally
the young
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frog
develops into an adult
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and the
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continues again.
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IELTS academic Life cycle of Frogs from birth to maturity

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166 words
5.5
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