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The diagram of recycling mobile phoness

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Given is the diagram illustrating the process by mobile phones are recycling, it is clear from facts 3 main phases from delivered to consumers untill resale the products. The first step is damaged phones are collected from consumers and transported to recycling company for recovered. The next stage of recycling is separating the mobile phones features, such as detoched batteries and dismantling from phones, also it included process of divated into machenic and nagnetic parts separation of metals, plastics, materials In the third of both process, these two metals: copper and precious from the iron components are selected. During the previous is smelted the closing with reused. At the same time, the plastic parts are converted to low-grade plastic or turned to restore energy. To note that, this diagram doesn't reveal how other materials are arrange of it.
Given
is the diagram illustrating the process by mobile
phones
are recycling, it is
clear
from facts 3 main phases from delivered to consumers
untill
resale the products. The
first
step
is damaged
phones
are collected
from consumers and transported to recycling
company
for recovered.

The
next
stage of recycling is separating the mobile
phones
features, such as
detoched
batteries and dismantling from
phones
,
also
it included process of
divated
into
machenic
and
nagnetic
parts separation of metals, plastics, materials

In the third of both process, these two metals: copper and precious from the iron components
are selected
. During the previous
is smelted
the closing with reused. At the same time, the plastic parts
are converted
to low-grade plastic or turned to restore energy.

To note that, this diagram doesn't reveal how other materials are
arrange
of it.
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