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Poly line graph about visitors who visited on a specific caribben island from 2010 to 2017

Poly line graph about visitors who visited on a specific caribben island from 2010 to 2017 BM86j
The given polyline graph indicates the information about the total number of visitors who visited is specific caribben Island from 2010 to 2017. It is clear from the graph that number of visitors who stayed on cruise trip and stayed on itself followed including trend throughout the time period. By 2010 The Count of total number of visitors should at approximately 1 million and it increased gradually until 2012. Afterwards a sharp incline was witnessed in the count by 2 million but in 2016 this count rows considerably from 2. 6 million to 3. 5 million. Moving further the figure of visitors who stayed on cruise ships was less than, who stayed on island itself in 2010 next year difference of 0. 1 million was observed in the count of people who stayed on cruise trip and Ireland the amount of mortals on cruise trip declined considerable by 0. 2 million whereas others rose significantly. After this both counts followed increasing trend and at the mid of 2015, both figures stood at same point at 1. 2 million. In 2016 the figure of visitors staying on cruise trip surpassed the another and reached its acme point at 2. 0 million
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graph indicates the information about the total number of
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visited is specific
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caribben
Island from 2010 to 2017. It is
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from the graph that number of
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visitors
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stayed
on
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cruise
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trip
and
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stayed
on itself followed including trend throughout the time period. By 2010 The
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Count
of total number of
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visitors
should at approximately 1
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million
and it increased
gradually
until 2012. Afterwards a sharp incline
was witnessed
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count
by 2
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million
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in 2016 this
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rows
considerably
from 2. 6
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to 3. 5
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. Moving
further
the figure of
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visitors
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stayed
on
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ships was less than,
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on island itself in 2010
next
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was observed
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cruise
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and Ireland the amount of mortals on
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cruise
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declined considerable by 0. 2
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million
whereas others rose
significantly
. After this both
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followed increasing trend and at the mid of 2015, both figures stood at same point at 1. 2
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million
. In 2016 the figure of
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visitors
staying on
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cruise
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trip
surpassed the another and reached its acme point at 2. 0
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million
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IELTS academic Poly line graph about visitors who visited on a specific caribben island from 2010 to 2017

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