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The three diagrams show information about three bridges.

The three diagrams show information about three bridges. Ll8Wp
The ostensible three diagrams details the information about the structure of three various type of bridges which are called Arch, concrete grider and Suspension bridge. First of all, it can be seen that Arch bridge has conical shape and it's height is no more than 100m also it's length is usually under 200m. This bridge is built on the lake by using different kinds of construction material and it has amenity of small ship in the river. Secondly, concrete grider bridge is no more than 300m in height, however no more than 200m in length. It has five piers which are made to give support a travel road because, it is barely evident these on piers a road has constructed for travel purposes. Middle size ship is available in the river but it's unlimited extent is depends on the number of piers. Finally, the modern shaped bridge is called suspension bridge which is much large with 400m-200m length and it has large size ship. This bridge is located on sea which is very deep and it has two largest piers into the sea which are safest for doing travel by large size ship. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that all three pictures of bridges show different kind of shape and size for each bridge.
The ostensible three diagrams
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details
the information about the structure of three various type of
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bridges
which
are called
Arch, concrete
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grider
and Suspension
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bridge
.
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First of all
, it can be
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seen
that Arch
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bridge
has conical shape and it's height is no more than
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100m
also
it's length is
usually
under
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200m
. This
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bridge
is built
on the lake by using
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different
kinds of construction material and it has amenity of
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small
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ship
in the river.
Secondly
, concrete
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grider
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bridge
is no more than
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300m
in height,
however
no more than
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200m
in length. It has five
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piers
which
are made
to give support a travel road
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because
, it is
barely
evident these on
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piers
a road has constructed for travel purposes. Middle
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size
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ship
is available in the river
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but
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it's unlimited extent
is depends on the number of
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piers
.
Finally
, the modern shaped
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bridge
is called
suspension
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bridge
which is much large with
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400m
-200m length and it has large
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size
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ship
. This
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bridge
is located
on sea which is
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very
deep and it has two largest
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piers
into the sea which are safest for doing travel by large
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size
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ship
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be
readily
apparent that all three pictures of
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bridges
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show
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different
kind of shape and
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size
for each
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bridge
.

IELTS academic The three diagrams show information about three bridges.

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