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The diagram of how chocolate was produced

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The pictures are describing describe the process of how chocolate was made from a cocoa tree until the chocolate was made in a factory. overall, there are ten processes to produce chocolate, beginning with selecting the cacao tree which is growing in American, Africa, and Indonesia. Next, we pick and select the ripe red pods which contain the white cocoa beans that can be taken out from the pods and we have to collect them in one container then we need to fermentation the white cocoa after that, we shall dry the cocoa on the sun until the cocoa gets dry and put them in the sack to delivered to the factory by vehicle (lorry or truck) which is going to be a process with the oven that cocoa will be roasted around 350°C after being roasted next process is using the machine that can remove the epidermis shell in cocoa finally the cocoa will be chocolate after the cocoa is pressed hard by machine and become the liquid of chocolate.

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process
 with the oven that cocoa will be roasted
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process
 is using the machine that can remove the epidermis shell in cocoa finally
 the cocoa will be chocolate after the cocoa is pressed
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 by machine and become the liquid of chocolate. 